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Despite writing a handful of excellent gothic horror novels, including The Haunting of Hill House (just made into a film for the second time), Shirley Jackson seems destined to be best remembered for her great short story The Lottery (read an online version).  Originally published in The New Yorker in 1948, and a a staple of High School English classes ever since, it elicited some of the most spirited response in the history of that dowdy weekly.  The story is a stunning indictment of something but is sufficiently ambiguous that many different individuals and groups were able to take personal offense at its implications.

It would seem to me though, that there is a pretty conventional way of reading it; one that both touches upon a basic human truth and offers fairly little offense to anyone.  Take it at relative face value and the Lottery represents any human institution which is allowed to continue unchallenged and unconsidered until it becomes a destructive, rather than a constructive, force in men's lives..   After all, in the story, the reasons for holding the Lottery are long forgotten, other than the platitudinous "Lottery in June, corn be heavy soon".  And the rituals connected to it, other than the making of participant lists, the use of the old ballot box and the swearing in, have mostly fallen by the wayside.  All that really remains is a rigid adherence to a hoary tradition.

Now folks can, of course, freight it with specific signifigances--read the whole thing as an attack on capitalism (see Dave Sandberg's review below ) or religion or small town conformity or agrarian culture or any of a number of different things.  But it seems to me that the most straightforward reading allows it to impact on all of those things.  Simply put, the fact that something has been done a certain way for a really long time does not necessarily justify its continuance.

If this powerfully disturbing story seems like too heavy a cudgel to wield to make such a self evident, unnuanced point, let's not underestimate how difficult it is to teach people anything.  After all, Plato has maintained the title of world's greatest philosopher for a few thousand years now on the basis of "Know thyself".  So, why shouldn't Shirley grab a spot in the limelight for herself with a story that admonishes us to examine our civic rituals, especially since she couched her admonition in a great American gothic horror tale, which still retains its visceral power to shock us.

DAVE SANDBERG'S REVIEW:
"Proto-Marxist Images in Shirley Jackson's 'The Lottery'" by David Neville Sandberg (10/27/99)

In Shirley Jackson's short story, The Lottery, we see the nascent beginnings of a Marxist sensibility in American short literature begin to emerge and express itself. Despite the intrinsic quirkiness of Jackson's writing, and maybe because of it, we can really get a sense of the suppressed socio-economic status of the repressed American need for socialized regulation  and state control of business and market forces. Liberty, Jackson demonstrates, is illusory in the American psyche as it is predicated on the exploitation of a sub-class which must be sacrificed for the benefit of all. The victim in the story is emblematic of the black, latino, and immigrant segments in our society who were fed into the American industrial maw for consumption as labor commodities. Indeed, without  this constant feeding the pastiche of the American economy would invariably collapse from the inertia of its own antiquity and social unfairness.

Capitalism, that mermaid on the rocks who lures sailors to their doom, must have her victims as well as her successful children. She must have losers as well as winners, and for the losers there can be no mercy and no reprieve from the public invalidation and execution of the exploited workers who toil daily in sub-standard work conditions and receive inadequate pay, health care, and social services.  The true genius of this work is its setting. Jackson has brought this indictment home to middle America, to the heartland streets of America's small villages. Economic evil does not flow outward from America's cities but inwards from the rural belt - from the heartland towns and villages where ignorance of better social systems deliberately inculcated in warped public educational standards keeps the American agrarian classes in a state of hostile xenophobia to new socialist ideas and reform.

GRADE: B+

ANDREW GELLER'S REVIEW:

Boy, what a horrific story.  I had not read it for many, many years.  My academic instinct is to insulate myself from the horror by concentrating on the details to examine the crux of the story, for example, the notion that no one liked to upset the tradition represented by the black box or how much of the ritual had been forgotten or discarded.

The story describes the catastrophic effects of tradition made separate from its roots.  Who knows if the stoning at the end of the lottery was even its original intent or effect?  So much of the ritual had been lost.  On a large scale, one can read it as an indictment of the medieval Church for maintaining its control through meaningless ritual and homage to an earthly leader while subverting the gentle lessons of Jesus to essentially imperial intents. By extension, one can indict central authorities that keep control through meaningless bureaucratic, somewhat ritualized activities -- filling out forms that are filed away having no effect but to delay attainment of the original goal of the activity.

ZACHARY BARNETT'S REVIEW:

Ahhhhh, summa time and the catfish is jumpin'.  Recommended vacation reading alongside other childhood greats, such as Huckleberry Finn and Treasure Island.

I remember seeing the movie in school.  Disturbing.  If I had only had an assault rifle.....

Actually, the whole point to this fable is to make grotesquely clear Man's absurd  fear of change.  And, of course this all goes down in a New England village -- New England being the nerve center of the American "fraidy cat" and where it is perfectly customary to go about the daily routine with a sharp stick in one's eye.

On another note, Mrs. Hutchinson deserved it.

MARY-ELLEN JUDD'S REVIEW:
Sorry I'm not as eloquent (wordy) as all you scholars (people with too much
time on their hands), but here's my interpretation (stab at it).  Let me know
what you think.

I say that it is an allegory(?) for how random life can be.  The old adage
that good things happen to good people and vice versa is seldom true. Death,
illness, ostracism and bad fortune are seldom doled out fairly.

STEPHEN JUDD'S REVIEW:
        I think that Andrew's analysis is a good one if you look at the story
analytically and intellectually.  However, what really intrigues me is the
visceral reaction of the first-time reader....I wish I could read the story
for the first time again.  Here's my take:

        The reader is repulsed by the idea that a town could merrily go along with
this tradition that is like lambs being led to slaughter.  But Zach's point
about Mrs. Hutchinson shouldn't be written off as a whacko's reaction (not
that Zach isn't a little whacked.)  I think the average reader does
disapprove of Mrs. Hutchinson's whining about the unfairness of the
lottery....what does that say about the readers' own sensibilities?   Had
Mrs. Hutchinson shouted out at the beginning that the lottery was insane and
shouldn't be conducted, we might view her as a hero.  Instead she
participates until she realizes it will affect her family and begins to
complain, not about the fact of the lottery but that it unfairly resulted in
her family being chosen.  The average reader (that leaves Dave out!) has
ingrained that once you opt into a process, you accept the consequences
bravely.  (On a side note, even Christ cried out in despair when he finally
came to the end.)  In conclusion, I think The Lottery sucks the reader in,
and if the reader examines his reaction to the story he may be surprised at
what he feels.  And these feelings are as much a result of our tradition as
anything.

NEIL GOLDSTEIN'S REVIEW:
well, it's pretty obvious to me:
1)  the blind lead the blind.
2)  People look out for themselves first.
3)  Intelligence cannot overcome blind mass animalistic hysteria.
4)  Duck and get out of dodge when someone is showing you whip ass.

CHARLIE HERZOG'S REVIEW:
I  think it's Pat Buchanan's revisionist allegory for our involvement in World War II.

                         * Mrs. Hutchinson is the United States reluctantly entering a war that
                         she supported while not directly involved.  Had she just stayed home and
                         washed the dishes, the outcome would've been much different.
                         * The Hutchinson family represents our NATO allies, gleefully showing
                         off their free passes while America takes on all the responsibility for a
                         war in which she has no defining interest.
                         * Mr. Summers is Hitler, essentially a benevolent despot controlling
                         the pace of the lottery/war, trying to exert his influence in a specific
                         sphere without extending past agreed to borders.
                         * The children of the  townspeople are the Nazis, blindly
                         participating in a cause without examining its moral consequences.
                         * The townspeople represent Russia, a large seething mass that Mr.
                         Summers desires to control for his own reasons (the new lottery box).  Had
                         the townspeople acquiesced to his demands for the new box, surely his
                         requests would have ended there.
                         * There is no allegorical reference to the Jews in this story, as they
                         aren't important enough to merit mention.

                         The Lottery is of course exactly the right title for this allegory, since it
                         reflects the random nature of the course America has chosen in its foreign
                         policy engagements.  America's death at the end of the story is a prediction
                         of our eventual fall should we continue to get involved in foreign wars
                         instead of "Putting America First."

DOROTHY C. JUDD REVIEW:
I found "The Lottery" frightening because it called to mind times we stand
around and watch something happen and do nothing about it just because it has
always been done that way.

I don't get all political on this stuff; just a gut human reaction.  :-)

WINGNUT'S REVIEW:
"Nascent beginnings of Marxist sensibility"?
                         "Suppressed socio-economic status"?

                         I'm sorry Orrin, but your buddy is way off here.  The lottery is a random
                         process and has more to do with the Fickle Finger of Fate than the
                         oppression of the minority.   And being a random lottery, it has more to
                         say about natural selection and the inability to predetermine one's own
                         course through life, than the actions of a governing body.  Yeah, there is
                         that whole inability to change the inertia of a group/tradition; notice the
                         lone cry in the wilderness, ie., Mrs. H, is the one that is ultimately buys
                         it -- ala Jack McMurphy in Cuckoo's Nest. So becoming the victim of
                         oppression is the combination of being in the wrong place at the wrong time
                         (random) and being the squeaky wheel (one's choice).

BRYAN FRANCOEUR'S REVIEW:
All right, already. Professor-and-Poet-Laureate Judd has been crawling up my butt to churn out some kind of pap about "The Lottery"   Silly me, I  thought I left writing vague, spineless  papers for irritating professors behind me when I graduated from college.

Shirley Jackson's "The Lottery" has about as much to do with Communism vs. Capitalism as "The Haunting of Hill House" has to do with centralized zoning laws.  Oh, sure, you can drag a bunch of symbollic garbage out of your rear to show that the black voting box is really the dark core of evil in men's souls, but really; that kind of dreck is best left for freshman Lit majors. And Dave.

What "The Lottery" is really about are the broader issues of not blindy obeying authority and not doing things just because they are tradition. The people of the town don't even stop to think about why they are killing someone, and we never find out through the course of the story  (personally, I think it was some kind of population control measure, but that's a guess).

When people talk about getting rid of the lottery and of other places that have gotten rid of it, the town elder casts scorn upon the idea. Why do things differently? The old ways work just fine for us, and we're not going to be swayed by some big city types.

So the morals of the story are: "Question authority" and "Just because something is old, doesn't make it good."

(Reviewed:)

Grade: (A)


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See also:

Shirley Jackson (3 books reviewed)
Horror
Shirley Jackson Links:

    -WIKIPEDIA: Shirley Jackson
    -ESSAY: My Life With R.H. Macy: Shirley Jackson's short stint with the department store (Shirley Jackson, December 22, 1941, New Republic)
    -ESSAY: Stranger Than Fiction: The Paranormal Researcher Who Inspired Shirley Jackson (Michele Debczak, Oct 27, 2022, Mental Floss)
    -ESSAY: SHIRLEY JACKSON GETS A JOB AT MACY’S (New England Historical Society)
    -ESSAY: 12 Chilling Facts About Shirley Jackson's 'The Haunting of Hill House' Anna Green, Oct 11, 2018, Mental Floss)
    -INTERVIEW: ‘The Letters of Shirley Jackson’ Is the Autobiography We’ve Been Waiting For: Laurence Jackson Hyman, son of author Shirley Jackson, talks to Shondaland about her new book and his mother’s literary legacy. (Sandra Ebejer, 8/20/21, Shondaland)
    -
   
-ESSAY: Shirley Jackson and the Unsettled Mystery of Life: On the disquieting fiction of the author of “The Lottery” and the chronicler of James Harris. (BILL RYAN, OCTOBER 21, 2021, The Bulwark) -ESSAY: Why Shirley Jackson is a Reader’s Writer: On the Brilliance of We Have Always Lived in the Castle and the Intimacy of Everyday Evil (Jonathan Lethem, February 24, 2021, Lit Hub)

Book-related and General Links:
    -BIO: (Brighton HS, Rochester, NY)
    -BIO: Life and Work
    -The Shirley Jackson Page (American Women Writers)
    -The Haunted World of Shirley Jackson  (Donna Dedman)
    -Shirley Jackson (Most Web)
    -ETEXT: The Lottery Shirley Jackson (1948)
    -ESSAY: A Reading of Shirley Jackson's "The Lottery" (Peter Kosenko)
    -ESSAY: the haunted hearth (margaret quamme, George Jr.)
    -SHORT STORY: What a Thought by Shirley Jackson (Book Wire)
    -Monstrous Acts & Little Murders: A new collection of unpublished stories betrays the two faces of Shirley Jackson, the writer who created "The Lottery."  (JONATHAN LETHEM, Salon)
    -ESSAY: Dark Thoughts Shirley Jackson (Paula Guran, Dark Echo)
    -The Irrepressible Individual in the Works of Shirley Jackson (Eran Mukamel)
    -REVIEW: Private Demons The Life of Shirley Jackson By Judy Oppenheimer (CHRISTOPHER LEHMANN-HAUPT, NY Times)
    -REVIEW: PRIVATE DEMONS The Life of Shirley Jackson By Judy Oppenheimer (Elizabeth Frank, NY Times Book Review)
    -REVIEW: Just An Ordinary Day By Shirley Jackson. Edited by Laurence Jackson Hyman and Sarah Hyman Stewart (Joyce Carol Oates, NY Times Book Review)
     -ESSAY: THE HAUNTING OF SHIRLEY JACKSON  (Judy Oppenheimer, NY Times Book Review)

Comments:

Gunner Girl

It's an allegory. Get a clue!!! The absurdity of the characters and situation was to make a point. Obviously, you didn't grasp it. Put yourself in the scene. What if it was you? Your mother or father, your brother or sister who was being sacrificed? The story was never intended to be realistic. It was to appeal to our reasoning and sense of values. "We have always done it this way" does not mean it is right.

I think you need to stick to comic books. Or, maybe Dick and Jane are more your speed. Dr Seusse may be too difficult for you. Wait a few years.

Good luck in the 1st grade.

James

- James

- Mar-16-2007, 03:14

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Does anyone know where I could get the video? I believe it was from a series called Short Story showcase.

- md

- Nov-06-2006, 23:03

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I found this story very boring and her style of writing monotonous and drawn out. Her writing wasnt very captivating and it dragged on and on and then when you get to the climax of the story at the end is very abrupt and unclear. After reading this I was left in uncertainty of what actually happened. I could only guess what it was about.

This story just irritated me how the people of the town didn't even stop to think about why they were killing someone, and we never find out through the course of the story. Im not even certain if they killed someone I just presumed that. When people talked about getting rid of the lottery and of other places that have gotten rid of it, the town elder casts scorn upon the idea. Why do things differently? The old ways work just fine for us, and we're not going to be swayed by some big city types. It just seemed stupid to me and made me think these people in the story were mentally challenged or limited in thought. Or incest related cause quite frankly they were all queer.

The plot was vague and spineless. I really wanted to question why she wrote such a queer story. I found myself persevering to read this piece of shit writing that some queer calls a story. And why our queer teacher made us study it.

- gunner girl

- Sep-25-2006, 22:04

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I thought that the story of "The Lottery" was amazing. I hate to read,but I definatly enjoyed reading this. The movie was even more amazing. I like to see things in detail rather than just read it. It's much different from other stories I have read for school. It kept me on the edge of my seat.

- Nikkie

- Apr-10-2006, 19:07

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i feel The Lottery is an expression of how the moral standards placed upon the individual are often lost when invovlved in a group activity.

- rexicide

- Oct-19-2005, 13:38

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I think that Jackson is following the pattern of many authors, through dominant perception. Our interpretations of " The Lottery " alter from person to person. No matter how many times you have read the story, it does not become any clearer as to why the tradition is continued. All reason and disputes of the black box are inconsiquential and the tradition will live on because the town views itself as a non - changing village. How ever if they were to change then their town wouldn't be any different from the surronding towns.

- S. Costa ( Australia)

- Feb-18-2005, 23:56

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stop bickering engprof isnt coming back

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- Oct-23-2004, 15:47

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Alright, while all the comments, no matter how broad-stroaked or agressive, provide a unique interpretation, I think the most obivious element is being overlooked. The ambiguous nature of "The Lottery" is the key. Jackson chose not to explain her story, allowing leeway for any and all interpretations. By turning everything into a symbol, we are doing with the villagers never did - asking questions. So interpret the story however you will. Just remember that you can't find what you are not looking for.

- Allison Vega

- Sep-29-2004, 18:40

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With a whining child like you teaching them, "Engprof," no wonder they don't get it. Look in the mirror -- if you can even see the mirror from where you seem to have your head stuck.

- sagesource

- May-12-2004, 16:12

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Just thought I would point out that I don't see how, or why Shirley Jackson would have written this story as an allegry for WWII, and not have something to represent the Jews. Because CHARLIE HERZOG if you would do a little bit of research you would have known that she was married to a Jew.

- Sam H.

- Mar-21-2004, 22:04

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I would say that I understand parody and satire...yet, I have to agree with Bryan that some stories mean what they seem to mean...any engprof with too much time on his hands can find multiple alternate themes/interpretaions.

To engprof (if you ever visit this site again) for the sake of all of us that live in the real world, would you please explain the basics of satire and parody, as expressed in The Lottery -- It is my personal opinion that the comments on this site are high-quality, though brief.

Thanks "brothersjudd" -- this page is really helpful

- hs juinor

- Nov-04-2003, 17:54

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Folks: If I thought for one minute that any of you (college graduates included) understood even the basics of satire and parody, I would have loved this entire thread of commentary. But you don't, despite the broad-stroke attempts at "Marxist" criticism or the back-handed swipe at Pat Robertson and the apologists for delayed entry to WWII. Sigh---it becomes more and more evident why magazines based on quality writing (The New Yorker, Atlantic, Harper's, etc.) are either out of business or nearly so. Come on, kiddies. If you want to write satire, read the great satirists: Pope's "The Rape of the Lock"; Twain (almost anything); H.L.Mencken (almost anything); Swift, "A Modest Proposal"; and many others. If you want to learn how to write great parody, see if you can find the old record albums (vinyl, 33 1/3 rpm records that were played on turntables, etc.) of Tom Lehrer: Songs By Tom Lehrer; An Evening With Tom Lehrer; That Was The Year That Was---those albums are priceless, combining both satire and parody. For pure parody, find records by Alan Sherman: My Son The Folksinger was the first; and I seem to remember that there were at least 2 other albums he put out before his death. Then perhaps you can write the kinds of critical commentary that would appeal to people with more than teletubbies' intelligence; you could write with wit and charm and grace.

- Engprof

- Apr-04-2003, 20:31

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